Found Poem: Sexuality Scrambles Mind By Leah Bernhardt

So, the article I chose was about a seminar back in 2018 explaining how women should act and dress in the workplace. The seminar got a lot of back lash for various of reasons but mostly about the appalling contents presented in the seminar. According to the article, women shouldn’t show their skin, shouldn’t be aggressive like men, and they shouldn’t talk to men face to face. From a basic look at the article, one would get offended with the treatment of women in the seminar but from their point of view they thought this would prevent future sexual harassment. In the end, they could have done this seminar in a less offensive way so that the women won’t feel trapped in the workplace based on their identity.

In order to create my found poem, I first started off with a blank white paper for the background. Then I looked at the article and decided on words that they used to describe femininity where women shouldn’t speak ill towards men, having no short skirts, and that sexuality scrambles the mind. After I found the words that mainly explained the event in the seminar, I made the words larger and printed off the article. After printing the pages off, I then cut each specific word out and taped them to the plain white paper. When taping the words to the paper I kept in mind the spacing and how each word impacted the reader. With the spacing of the words, the reader has time to think about how the words reflects to the ideals of femininity and how it contrasts with modern society.

After working on this found poem, I learned that using less words creates more of an impact on the piece. The fewer words makes the reader think more about the meaning without the meaning popping out and ruining the mystery. With Zong!, it creates the same idea as portrayed in my found poem, fewer words, bigger impact.

Beneatha Younger: The Written Play vs. The Movie

By Leah

The character of Beneatha is either loved or hated by the audience in A Raisin in the Sun depending on the version of the play. In the written play, Beneatha can be seen by the reader as a strong, mature women who prioritizes her education and strives to become a doctor. Her character in the movie; however, is shown as a child who hasn’t matured and takes everything for granted. We can see these two types of Beneatha’s in the scene with Mama and Ruth and the later scene with Asagai.

Towards the beginning of the play, we have the scene between Mama, Ruth, and Beneatha about marriage and religion. Beneatha states that “[She’s] not worried about who [she’s] going to marry yet-if [she’s] ever get[s] married.” (50). Then she goes into her beliefs about religion and how “It’s all a matter of ideas…” (51) which triggers Mama to the point where she smacks Beneatha across the face. In the written play, she comes across more passionate about how she views her beliefs and she want to explain her beliefs to Mama and Ruth. With Beneatha’s education, she believes that God shouldn’t be “getting credit for all the things the human race achieves through its own stubborn effect.” (51). Her education has shown her that humanity has created so many objects throughout time and with that realizes that God hasn’t done anything for anyone. In the movie; however, she appears to be pushy with her actions towards her family. While Beneatha is talking to both women about her beliefs, the camera keeps cutting back to both Ruth’s and Mama’s reactions. At the point where Beneatha explains that “God hasn’t got a thing to do with it.” (50), both women stop their tasks and stare at Beneatha with disbelief. As Beneatha continues talking, Mama gets seriously angry at Beneatha and calls her a child. In the movie, Beneatha thinks she knows everything about life but doesn’t realize what sacrifices Mama had to go through to get Beneatha and Walter to church every Sunday.

Later, in the play, the reader comes across the scene between Beneatha and Asagai. In the written play, Beneatha appears to be passionate about her curiosity for Africa with Asagai. Asagai even explains to Beneatha about their first meeting at their school. At that time, she asks him questions “About Africa” (62) and how she was “looking for her identity” (62). With her schooling she starts to question her own heritage and wonders if Africa is where she belongs instead of America. Even with the stage direction it shows that Beneatha is passionate about her own beliefs and how she isn’t an assimilationist like the rest of her family. On page 63, her stage direction wants the character of Beneatha to be “Wheeling, passionately, [and] sharply.” Even though she may seem passionate on paper, on the big screen she appears to be childish. With the same scene of being called an assimilationist, her tone of voice appears to be whiny instead of sounding like a mature woman. Then when Asagai tries to reference marriage or a relationship to Beneatha, she explodes about how she is “not interested in being someone’s little episode in America…” (64).

Beneatha is educated women who can be interpreted as either mature or childish. She knows a lot the outside world of Chicago through her college with books, but she hasn’t gone out to the real world and implement those teachings like Mama. She hasn’t seen how much her mother has scarified for her to have a better life and career for her and she hasn’t realized that her heritage is really in America with the rest of the Younger family.

Discussion Questions:

  1. What other examples are shown throughout the play that makes Beneatha mature or childish?
  2. How are Beneatha’s actions similar or different to her actions shown in the movie?

Greetings and salutations!

My name is Leah and I’m a freshman majoring in Graphic Design and Digital Media. I’m from Groton, NY and I work at my families’ dog boarding facility. I love exotic animals like chameleons and I enjoy reading many genres of books. I’m excited to get to know everyone throughout this semester.